After reviewing the errors on my Pride and Prejudice essay, I have decided that I need to go into greater depth on my quote analysis. Furthermore, I have to shorten the quotes I have chosen for the essay and make sure they all prove my point. The point of my essay is that living in moderation is more beneficial to someone rather than living on either extremes of the spectrum. I have to make sure that my essay proves that Jane and Mr. Bennet have benefited from living in the middle of the spectrum. Some of the sentences in the essay are unclear and weak. I must go through and make sure that every sentence is easy to understand and strong. Lastly, the must add me last body paragraph and a concluding paragraph.
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