Essay number one (A) deserves a grade in the A range. It was logical and clearly structured. The writing was clear and conversational yet extremely sophisticated. Furthermore, the essay had sufficient analysis of the topic and excellent blending of the quotes. The author was able to use evidence to back up his claims and prove his thesis.
The essay that I chose to be in the B range was essay number 2(B). The author was a little repetitive throughout his essay but had some great in depth evidence throughout. The structure was relatively sophisticated and logical, but lacked some fundamental factors in the analysis. However, overall, the essay was successful and well done.
Essay number 3 (C), which I believe to be the least successful of the three, deserves a grade in the C to B- range. The thesis statement lacked development and interest. Not only was the essay confusing and poorly formulated, it also lacked a conversational tone. The author of the essay did not spend enough time in the planning stages before he/she started writing. Thus, the reader can see the illogical structure of the essay. The quote analysis lacked serious sophistication and meaning. The essay present excellent ideas, but they were not fully developed.
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